WM – Chapter 291: Takatsuki Makoto reunites with his comrades

Author’s Note: Day 25/05/2021 is the day the 7th volume of the novel and the 2nd volume of the manga will be sold!! Both covers feature Lucy!


“Makoto…”

“Takatsuki-kun…”

I have currently been pushed down by Lucy and Sa-san who are giving off a slightly different feel.

Seeing the two drenched in tears, my eyes began to grow hotter from the nostalgia. 

But this is the guest room of the Fujiwara Company.

Fuji-yan and Nina-san are obviously here, and Momo is glaring here with a displeased look.

Gotta understand the T(ime)P(lace)O(ccassion).

Is what I was thinking, but it seems like these two don’t care about any of that. 

“…You are finally back…Takatsuki-kun.” (Aya)

The one saying this while still hugging me was Sa-san.

“Wait, Aya?! What are you doing?!” (Lucy)

Sa-san ignored the flustered voice of Lucy and wrapped her arms around my head.

I-I can’t move.

“Hnnn…!” (Makoto)

And then, I was kissed.

(Wa?!) (Makoto)

I didn’t even have the time to be surprised as my lips were sealed.

“Aah!!” (Lucy)

Lucy screams.

“How dare you get ahead there, Aya!” (Lucy)

I for sure thought that she would be stopping Sa-san, but she instead hugged me too.

(Heavy!) (Makoto)

A word that must not be said towards a girl.

But no matter how slender of a girl they are, having two girls hugging me from up top is heavy.

In the first place, my mouth has been covered, so I can’t say anything.

“Ma~ko~to~…Ei!” (Lucy)

Lucy pushes Sa-san and kisses me.

(?! Eh?!) (Makoto)

My brain was overloaded here and I can’t keep up with what’s going on.

Right now…Lucy and Sa-san were kissing me at the same time?

(Uwa~… Unbelievable~. So lewd~.) (Ira)

Ira-sama, don’t just sneer there and help me!

(How am I going to help you? Just push them away. You are a man.) (Ira)

With my weak body, I can’t move them one bit!

“…Hn…chu…” (Lucy)

“…Haah…Takatsuki-kun.” (Aya)

The long kiss of Lucy and Sa-san is unending.

My vision is being blocked by the faces of the two, so I checked our state with the perspective change of RPG Player.

Yeah, I am completely being assaulted here.

Also, I noticed that Lucy and Sa-san were wearing matching bracelets.

They really get along well…

Or more like, I am already running out of breath here…

“You people, give it a break already.” 

My vision suddenly cleared.

My body grew lighter, and noticed that my body was floating in the air.

“Mo—Great Sage-sama?” (Makoto)

Looks like Momo pulled me out with Teleport.

Lucy and Sa-san didn’t notice I disappeared and were still going on with the kiss.

…What’s with this situation?

“Eh?” (Aya)

The first one to notice was Sa-san.

“Only Lu-chan? And Takatsuki-kun?” (Aya)

“Wa? Where’s Makoto?” (Lucy)

The two separated and turned here while wiping their lips.

How are you acting so normally?

“Oi, you cats in heat, keep it in moderation.” (Momo)

Momo speaks with a low tone in a bad mood.

“Geh, Great Sage-sensei.” (Lucy)

“Ah, Great Sage-san.” (Aya)

Lucy made an ‘oh no’ face and Sa-san let out an ‘achaaa’.

“Well, it has been a while since they reunited. The two must have lost their calm. Now that everyone is back to their senses, let’s hear out Takki-dono…” (Fuji)

Fuji-yan brings back order and claps his hands.

Whew, looks like we can finally have a calm talk.

Is what I thought, but I felt chills run down my back.

“…Spirit User-kun.” (Momo)

The tone of Momo was low.

It has been a while since Momo has called me that.

Was she actually imitating Mel-san? 

“W-What is it, Great Sage-sama…?” (Makoto)

“I am hungry.” (Momo)

“That’s…” (Makoto)

“Give me blood.” (Momo)

“Right now?!” (Makoto)

It wasn’t when we were alone? 

She pulled my collar without  even giving me the chance to be flustered. 

I could feel the cold breath of Momo on my neck.

“Eh?!” 

“Wait!” 

Lucy and Sa-san raise their voices.

Fuji-yan and Nina-san looked at each other as if troubled, but it doesn’t seem they plan on stopping this.

Did these two know that Momo was a vampire?

Ah, Fuji-yan has his mind reading skill, so it should be okay, huh.

Fuji-yan makes a good grief face. 

“*Kapu*.” (Momo)

Momo bites my neck.

Her small throat made gulping sounds.

You waited for 1,000 years, so go ahead and drink as much as you like.

“Wait, uhm…why are you taking off my clothes…” (Makoto)

Momo’s small hands were touching my body all over.

The front buttons were being undone one after the other.

Momo…when did you become such a lewd girl?

““…””

Also, the gazes of Lucy and Sa-san hurt.

…….Gulp……Gulp……Gulp……Gulp……

Momo was still drinking my blood.

But I feel like her drinking speed is slow, or more like, she is purposely drinking slow.

(So long…) (Makoto)

I let go of the strength in my body and let her do as she pleased.

An awkward atmosphere covered the guest room.

1 minute…2 minutes passed.

“How long are you planning on drinking, Great Sage-sensei?!” (Lucy)

The first one to snap was the short tempered Lucy.

“Get away~! Great Sage-san!” (Aya)

Sa-san tried to tear Momo away.

“Oi, let go, you little runts! Don’t get in my way!” (Momo)

Momo is actually the younger looking one though…

“Makoto as well! Getting all lovestruck there!” (Lucy)

“Takatsuki-kun~, do you like small girls~?” (Aya)

“You, don’t call me small! The sizes of our breasts are the same.” (Momo)

“?! I have more than you!” (Aya)

“Pfft, what a low level battle.” (Lucy)

““Hah?”” (Sa-san and Momo’s glare)

“Hiiih!” (Lucy)

Lucy stepped on a landmine.

“Uhm…everyone, calm d—” (Makoto)

Just when I tried to calm down the three, I heard a small ruckus.

—Kyaah~.

—Angry.

—They are angry.

—Scary scary.

—Trouble trouble.

—Ruun.

The Water Spirits got noisy. 

Oh…?

And then, the temperature in the room lowered drastically.

“C-Cold! Danna-sama.” (Nina)

“What’s happening…?” (Fuji)

I heard the voices of Fuji-yan and Nina-san.

Lucy, Sa-san, and the Great Sage-sama who were making noise until now felt the abnormal situation and went silent.

As for me, I direct my gaze at the person that’s the source of the Water Spirits causing a ruckus.

There was one woman standing there.

Long light blue glossy hair.

Clear blue eyes.

Her simple dress accentuating her beauty. 

The Water Oracle…Princess Sofia Eir Rozes.

 She directed her gaze towards Lucy, Sa-san, and the Great Sage-sama.

Her cold ice gaze.

“Oh?” (Sofia)

With that one word of Princess Sofia…the temperature of the room went down even more.

Fuji-yan and Nina-san were trembling.

This isn’t good.

“XXXXXXXXX (Water Spirits, raise the temperature).” (Makoto)

I secretly adjust the temperature of the room before Fuji-yan and the others catch a cold.

“…Is the one there Hero Makoto?” (Sofia)

When my name is called, Lucy, Sa-san, and the Great Sage-sama darted away from me. 

“I-It has been a while, Sofia.” (Makoto)

I answer awkwardly. 

“Fufufu…I heard from Eir-sama that you had woken up just recently, but it looks like you are already enjoying yourself.” (Sofia)

Her tone is gentle, but her eyes are not smiling at all.

“““……”””

No one is talking.

“What’s the matter? Go ahead, continue.” (Sofia)

Princess Sofia smiles with only her voice sounding gentle.

“I-I am okay now… Yeah, it is okay, Princess Sofia.” (Lucy)

“Y-Yeah, I can talk with Takatsuki-kun later after all.” (Aya)

“R-Right. Mako—Spirit User-kun, come to my residence later.” (Momo)

Momo disappeared with a *shuin* using Teleport.

She ran away.

“I see. Then, Hero Makoto, please come here.” (Sofia)

Princess Sofia says this and takes my hand.

“W-Where are we going?” (Makoto)

“To the Highland Castle. There’s a lot of people who are eagerly waiting to see you again.” (Sofia)

Saying this, she pulled me persistently. 

“Do your best~.” (Lucy)

“Fighto, Takatsuki-kun!” (Aya)

Lucy and Sa-san waved their hands.

Looks like they have no intention of coming along.

The knights of the Water Country were waiting outside the door.

The Guardian Knight Old Man was also in good health.

“Hero-dono!” 

“It has been a while, Old Man.” (Makoto)

“Let’s go.” (Sofia)

I didn’t even have the time to enjoy our reunion and was pushed into the carriage.

◇◇

I was being shaken by the carriage.

There’s only Princess Sofia and me inside the carriage.

“……”

“……”

Silence continued for a while in this carriage that was heading to the Highland Castle.

Princess Sofia and I were sitting facing each other.

Princess Sofia was looking at the side and watching the streetscape.

No, she is glancing here constantly, so it doesn’t look like she wants to watch the scenery.

“Uhm…Have you been doing well, Sofia?” (Makoto)

I nervously spoke to Princess Sofia, but a response didn’t come immediately.

I wait patiently.

After a good while of silence, a response came back faintly.

“……Dummy. I have been waiting.” (Sofia)

I got lightly scolded there.

Princess Sofia suddenly stood up.

The shaking isn’t that strong, but it is a moving carriage. 

Before I could say ‘that’s dangerous’, Princess Sofia sat flatly by my side.

It is not a big carriage, so our shoulders end up sticking to each other no matter what. 

She wrapped her arms around mine, and she held my hand tightly. 

When I looked at Princess Sofia, I noticed she was also looking at me.

A distance our noses could touch.

The breathing of two people resonated.

Warm breath was brushing my face.

““……””

I couldn’t say anything, and Princess Sofia wasn’t saying anything.

The face of Princess Sofia slowly approached mine.

I was pulled in by her gem-like blue eyes, and by the time I noticed…I had been pushed down.


■Author’s Comment in this chapter.

This time’s chapter was a bit questionable, but it is about Sa-san, Lucy, and Princess Sofia reuniting with him after 1 year, so please forgive me. I wanted to have them flirt. 

With Princess Sofia in a closed space, just the two of them….there’s no way nothing would happen.

Makoto-kun is getting pushed down left and right.


TLN: Hey guys, Reigokai here! 

I will be placing the continuation of the author’s comment from the epilogue here.

Just a comment of my own here. This afterword contains a spoiler I am not that much of a fan of. I will be separating that comment for the ones who want to avoid reading it, and will put it at the end of this author’s comment.

Really, I felt like I watched the intro of a game and got spoiled by it.

Also, please refrain from commenting about the separated part of the author’s comment. You will technically be spoiling others as well. 

■Author Comment (10th Arc afterword):

[Johnny Walker]

The origin of the name is from the whisky Johnny Walker. 

A brand I like.

In the first arc, I had no intention at all to have him appear, and was simply used for the family name of Lucy.

He is a mysterious person that sometimes mutters japanese proverbs. 

He might be an otherworlder on the inside, but please don’t mind it. 

[White Dragon = Mel-san]

The one in charge of being the ride 1,000 years ago…was what was planned, but by the time I noticed, she became a super important character.

Without you, I wouldn’t have been able to move around the 10th Arc…

Thanks, Mel-san.

The original setting was that she would be the little sister of the Ancient Dragon King or the fiancee. 

In the end, I decided for the daughter of the Ancient Dragon King Demon Lord.

[Black Knight Demon Lord = Cain]

He was also not planned to appear when the story was still in the 1st Arc…

‘It is the enemy of Abel, so let’s make him be Cain’ is the kind of on the spot name I gave him, and then regretted later.

Should I make him the sister of Anna? Is what I thought, but then I went ‘I can’t increase the number of heroines anymore!’ and ended up being the fanatic Demon Lord that was originally planned.

I couldn’t bring out the feeling of fanaticism that much…

[Anna Highland = Light Hero]

The local heroine of 1,000 years ago.

It is a character that I wanted to make because I wanted to do the one-off twist of Hero Abel = Holy Maiden Anna.

Let’s decide at what distance of a heroine she will be with Makoto as I write it…is what I was thinking, and she completely ended up as an actual heroine. 

About the response to the [Will you marry Anna Highland?] and her promise with Makoto…she is a character that still has a lot of mysteries remaining. The character that gave me the most trouble in the 10th Arc. 

[Destiny Goddess, Ira-sama]

She properly has her turn in the last arc, so I won’t talk about it here. 

If I had to say something, she is the one character that deviated from the plot and went wild the most.

The reason why the releases of the 10th Arc got slower was because of this Goddess.

That’s all for the afterword.


Spoiler: Taken from the Anna part.

Click here to see spoiler

About what happened to her…I am thinking about adding to it in the After Story once the main story is done. I plan on touching that topic bit by bit in the main story though.

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144 thoughts on “WM – Chapter 291: Takatsuki Makoto reunites with his comrades

  1. So we get a brief skimmed Epilogue for the whole Highland arc and then author-san rushes us Back To The Future (lol – I had to say it) so we can spend pages over the virgin getting kissed up by his harem…? Jeez~ I guess that’s what the demographic wants then?
    Or is it just what the author likes to write ?
    But either way that cherry boy Makoto needs to sh*t or get off the pot… Y’know?
    Rinse and repeating chapters of the increasing harem girls fawning over him while never going anywhere is so not my thing…
    You’re a fool Charlie Brown! :3 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/0d690c6e95ab5a759372534cf53c59d63ee78f676adc47efce01334dd262b48a.gif

  2. Warning! Warning! Virgin Status in danger! Initialise Virginity Protection Program. Scan surroundings, compile data… Start simulations…. …. … … Solution found in Simulation 442. 978. Loading Adaptive CockBlock V.11…. CockBlocker ready to Intercept.

  3. It’s confirmed Sa-san is almost as flat as Momo, the illustrations are a lie, she’s padding her bra! XD

  4. Eso era un spoiler ?? ,No lo sentí como uno la verdad , en fin , gracias por la traducción estuvo muy buena

  5. Thanks for hiding that spoiler~

    In retrospect, I should’ve expected them to all be unspeakably thirsty. Especially Momo.
    Good thing Sa-san and Lucy get along so well. A prerequisite to a working harem, I guess. Sophia’s gotten to the point where even the Great Sage backs off too, it seems. Good for her.

    …I’ve said this before, but I don’t dig how Takki is portrayed. I want someone less generic-Isekai face, and certainly less pretty. I’m more imagining someone like Shiraishi the mob from that slice of life. He needs a more absent expression.

  6. worry not,hereticslayer, she has her turn in the last arc but it didnt say that the last arc would be the next one, he still has to rescue noah and spend some time with his harem after all and get boosted into godhood if he wants to have fun with ira

  7. I’m in agreement with those that didn’t like the look of the manga. In my case, everyone who appeared in the manga looked like they were all from the first half of elementary school which made me want to point them out and say “Officer, it’s him.” (I realise that this looks like an accusation, but I wanted to read a story with high school aged and adult characters, not some weirdo satisfying their fetishes).

  8. Finally~! I need those dere dere slightly ecchi stuff! I was hoping Sofia would kiss Makoto when he got sent back into the past, and dere dere Momo is DA BEST~!

  9. Thank you for the chapter!

    1- Hahaha, they really did jump on him!!!

    2- …and both Lucy and Aya seem really…used to it? ;)~

    3- Wow, even the great sage falls back before Sophia?! Behold! The power of the legal wife!!! XDDD

    3.1. And she’s agressive! Lots of pushdowns today!!!

  10. This chapter reminds me of one impt thing that I like abt this Makoto.

    He is being pushed down left and right.
    However, he always managed to keep his V-card.

    I have this weird feeling that, it will nv be gone (with Momo being so enchanted by the blood)

    ———————————–

    I do hope that it is explained in this arc, who created the skill “rpg player” and for what reason

  11. It’s always fun to see makoto being pushed around by all the girls, as well as the power dynamic between them all. as for that spoiler, does that even really count as a spoiler? it basically didn’t say anything that I didn’t expect. I won’t talk about the contents since you said not too though. it always makes my day to see an update of this, thanks!

  12. Woah, Aya and Sa-san relationship must have advanced miles for them to be used to kissing each other like that in front of others. I guess they did everything under the sun to console each other. Maybe just saving actual penetration sex for Makoto? I just can’t see it not being that way after this chapter

    1. I guess it’s a spoiler that’s not really a spoiler. The author will tell us what happened after the story is finished.

  13. Hmmmm… Read the author’s note, is Anna not coming to this time period? That’s gonna be a real bummer if so..

    Also, honestly it feels like Aya and Lucy doesn’t really need Makoto? Just looks to me like they only long for him when he is gone/getting flirted on by other heroines.

    Feel that Makoto is like a seasoning to their (Aya/Lucy) relationship, similar to MobuSeka and the two wives in Road to Kingdom.

    Still love the story though, thanks for the updates!!

  14. Soooooo… its been said this is a last arc?? is it true? And what about Ira got her turn in last Arc? Im pretty sure the last arc will be focused on Noah though…. And now that Noah got Many followers, will there also be a Hero and Oracle for Noah? Cant wait to see them. Makoto is an apostle so it should still rank higher than them though….

  15. That’s my girl! be on the offensive and take your man for yourself.
    This is the first time that she’s been aggressive, right? I can imagine Makoto being under Sophia while she gives Makoto lots of kisses.

  16. thanks for the upload…

    Lucy and Aya really get along together, at first in their relationship they will do catfight when Lucy or Aya steal a march to Makoto. but now Lucy and Aya really doesn’t care as long as Lucy, Aya, and Makoto can become family together.

    it’s a good thing that no one is against the harem route.

    also the power of princess as legal wife (?) is real. Sofia can make Lucy and Aya to back off and also to make Momo the great sage to run away. LOL 😂

  17. Thank you kami-sama. Donator angels you are missed.

    Imo Fuji’s power is broken. If it’s a galge power it should only work on females.

    I wonder how long b4 Momo stops caring and is open about her relationship with her master.

    Finally what are your guesses on who’s the witch. Right now I’m at
    1st Furi-tan
    2nd Noel
    3rd Aya

      1. Because she’s someone close to him. Evil Oracle saw the future so she knows a lot about him. She also said they met already so she’s a possible candidate. Plus in these scenarios authors tend to choose from the inner circle. Of course I realize since she came from earth she’s unlikely.

  18. Lucy looks quite childish in the manga volume illustration if I’m honest.

    Anyways so basically this chapter was about Lucy and Sa-san pushing down Makoto and Momo getting jealous so she pulls him away to suck him. His blood I mean you perverts.

    Meanwhile both Makoto AND Momo almost messed up and started calling each other “Momo” and “Makoto-sama” respectively before catching themselves.

    Now in comes the legal waifu! Showing off the composure and pressure as befitting of the top wife. Even Momo got scared and ran away. Of course Sofia still pushes Makoto down when they are alone though. Probably told the carriage driver to take the long scenic route to Highland Castle.

    Still waiting to know the status of everything though. How much have things changed because of Makoto borking up history and time and how much of those changes are the fault of the Ponkotsu Goddess Ira-chan? What’s happened with Furi? Does she have any connection to Nevia like the rumors that the Highland nobles previously spread about her?

    Anyways now to comment about the author afterword:
    So Johnny is possibly a reincarnated otherworlder but please don’t mind it? I DO mind it. That seems like a bit too important bit of information to reveal in an afterword and also to not have that factor into the story somehow.

    So Mel was originally supposed to be the little sister of the Ancient Dragon King or the fiancee and nothing more than the Hero Party’s ride. Then the author settled on making her Astaroth’s daughter and she ended up being way more important than planned. Since this is the last arc, hopefully she get more of a heroine spot this time. She already introduced Makoto to her father and he approved so…

    Cain meanwhile was named like that just because the Hero was named Abel and originally Cain was going to be Abel’s sister. The author changed it to male because according to him, ‘I can’t increase the number of heroines anymore!’ but let’s be honest, that ain’t gonna stop the fujoushis.

    As for Anna, the author apparently didn’t plan to make her a heroine but she became one anyways. I’m still waiting to know how Makoto answered to her marriage proposal and what promise they made. Plus how are they going to deal with the whole “Highland royalty are her descendants”?

    Ah Ira-chan rampaged and deviated from the plot the most apparently. Also the arc went by so slow and took so long because of her. Truly she is the Ponkotsu Goddess. Well apparently she’ll be getting her proper turn in this arc so yay.

  19. I think Fuji-yan is going to be very important soon, precisely because he reads minds. Think of Nevia saying that she was going to be reincarnated, and that her reincarnation already met Makoto. So he’s the perfect one to expose her. I still worry that it is gonna be Furiae awakening past-life memories, but I also hope I’m wrong because that could get really ugly.

    Makoto still need to debrief everyone though, which could be shocking. But perhaps Momo did so already.

  20. Nuuoooo it was so short!!
    Anyways thanks for the Chapter (≧▽≦)
    And I’m really glad Author-san’s really write a after story just as i hoped for.
    And this chapter is a bit lewd but well it’s good

  21. Thanks for the uploads as always!

    Hmm a scenerio which resulted in lucy and aya pushing makoto down, had a blood sipping momo trying to do the deal with him and to top it off, sofia being normal till eye cantact was made and then pushing him down. I’m thinking this idiot thought somethimg to the effect of “i wonder if i can train skill proficiencies while I’m frozen?” since he would (albeit with ira and dia’s help) be using waterand destiny magic the entire time. Suppose he left charm on the entire time?

  22. “The reason why this arc was slower because of this Goddess.”

    Man Ira really cause trouble anywhere.

    So this is the “suck scene” from Momo? Needs moar.

    Makoto visit her tent!

    And the three-way was kinda not needed but it is welcomed.

  23. Thanks for the chapter.

    I’m guessing that
    1. Makoto is the great granddaddy of Highland
    2. He dedicated the dead Demon Lords to Eir-sama to regain lifespan, which creates the question of where those water country champion souls went.

  24. Thanks for dividing the spoiler part, just in case I also not gonna read the rest of comments. Anyways, focusing in the resto of what the author said, damn, so he really didn’t controled Ira-chan and was also surprised by her unstoppable flirting with Makoto, nice!

  25. Full week of waiting for seeing our wimp getting pushed here and there, no new info or plot, eh~
    Don’t tell me same will repeat for every harem member in this volume?
    Neither changed Water country(heck, he sacrificed an army-worth of souls), no Noel’s circumstances(even if I don’t really want them), nor Tsui/Furi/Moon Queen secret….
    And Noah still silent. Ira is nice, but this gives me murky aftertaste…
    Well, at least we got Lucy’s arts

  26. Very affectionate overpowered harem, but body made of glass making that almost impossible to enjoy.
    It’s kind of sad.

    On another hand:
    Does anybody else have hope for complete shitstorm, if entire truth about past will get revealed?

  27. Woah, the author is serious about the Aya Lucy yuri pairing. Well, I’m not complaining.

    And I figured Sophia would push Makoto down. She already knows that’s the only way that she’ll get anywhere.

    Ira is still a pre-teen so she can easily scoff at any lewd stuff. She might be thousands of years ago but it’s been clear for a while she actually a young goddess rather than just looking young.

    With a loli joining the harem, it means that Makoto will probably stay a virgin until after the novel is over when the sex thing can be glossed over. Or perhaps drinking blood is their version of sex.

    1. Momo is now > 1000 years old. I believe Ira is millions of years old. It is therefore is no issue for Makoto to get together with either. They only need to watch the wording (nothing too explicit) considering the age ratings of the novel.

      But can he do that with a goddess? I wonder if it is even possible really, since they’re such a different existence. I’d think Makoto’s body would be much too fragile to consider that with a goddess. Well he could be revived if he got accidentally killed.

    2. I mean Makoto IS aiming to go the standard route where he remains a virgin until the end where everything has been resolved.

      1. Honestly we still haven’t found out about the east yet since it is a hell of a lot interesting since humans are fighting over there, there maybe a case the rest of Makoto class reincarnated over there.

  28. I’m so damn late again it isn’t funny.
    Damn in-laws for coming unannounced.
    They still here and I’m hiding in the restroom.
    Going to have to wait for them to leave before I can read the chapter.
    🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬

    1. Japanese readers are really strict when it comes to the virginity of the heroines. An author even had to rewrite a part of his WN due to the fact that a heroine (considered to be one of the best girl) wasn’t a virgin.

      1. And there’s also an author who got death threats because she made the heroine got raped as a cheap plot trigger… Then released a revised version with the antagonist being a gay lol

        The novel is about blacksmith btw

    2. Yeah, I think there may have been such situations, especially since only the both of in the harem were together on the 1-year span. Felt like it has become the same with FMCs of The World of Otome Games is too Tough for Mobs

      1. The Mob one was a disaster. A lot of people drop the LN because Leon’s two wives being too close to each other because he is too busy adding new wive.

      1. I feel like it fits perfectly. There is 0 negativity in this over and the overall feel is pretty wholesome. Cute art is welcome. You can just say what you mean and admit that you meant that you wish the characters fit your taste more

    1. I think it fits at least on early arc,hope the mangaka shift it to more mature style on mid to end arc because the character already more mature physically and nentally there

    1. > Ira sama reacting “unbelievable, how lewd” depicts maturity and interested in relationship between man and woman. Yeah, for now she can push for imouto-oniisan relationship for now despite being a legal loli in our point of view

      > after reading this chapter, it let me remember my kisses to all of my ex, and the feeling of their soft lips 💋. Well remembering the times of being flirted by a girl whom that time love you so much cant helped by remembering those times because of all the flirting happening here. Though the difference is the girls on this series are really aggressive due to competitive heart.

      1. somehow i imagined Ira like Neptune in the anime with the “oh my, how lewd”, dunno why i imagined her like that

    1. ya beat me to it lol i bought the ln on bookwalker even tho i cant read japanese so i basically bought it for the illustrations and to support the author

    2. The girls look a LOT younger than what I imagined, esp Olga. Wth? You(author) gave a woman norse sounding name and then made her look like 13? Damn I’m calling the police!

    3. Eh really? I already saw this and I like this kind of art style compared to the previous one instead. The illustration of the scene when furiae got gropped by Makoto is I like the most

    1. This chapter is basically Makoto getting pushed down by his harem. I wanted to see Furiae too but seems like she’s busy or something?

      Damn, Momo properly asserting her dominance as the best heroine. And just I predicted, Makoto would be the one who’ll probably slip Momo’s name. He almost said it there after all.

      Sofia even scared water spirits too wtf. I wonder if Dia would react the same if that happened again. And Makoto just casually increasing the temp as if he was a water spirit, seems like he got closer to them.

      Looking forward to meeting Geralt again and seeing if he’ll challenge Makoto to a fight. Also, waiting for Makoto to assert his dominance on all of those snobby royalties and nobles on his return!

        1. Ohhhh. That is possible too. Thinking about it now, I might like it better if Momo is the one who slips up now.

        1. Maybe she’s hiding? This era is controlled by the Holy Gods after all. But Noah is the eighth goddess and controls spirits so maybe there’s a slight bit freedom too and she’s just shy?

      1. Nah, I don’t think she should be hiding just because this era being controlled by Holy Gods. She even holds a proper conversation with Ira back then. She’s not the kind of shy towards other people either.

    1. “…Spirit User-kun.” (Momo)
      The tone of Momo was low.
      It has been a while since Momo has called me that.
      “W-What is it, Great Sage-sama…?” (Makoto)
      “I am hungry.” (Momo)
      “That’s…” (Makoto)
      “Give me blood.” (Momo)
      “Right now?!” (Makoto)

      Momo got jealous~

      “You, don’t call me small! The sizes of our breasts are the same.” (Momo)
      “?! I have more than you!” (Aya)
      “Pfft, what a low level battle.” (Lucy)
      ““Hah?”” (Sa-san and Momo’s glare)
      “Hiiih!” (Lucy)

      One more topic that you shouldnt touch on about women is their chest size (LOL)

      “…Is the one there Hero Makoto?” (Sofia)
      When my name is called, Lucy, Sa-san, and the Great Sage-sama darted away from me.
      “I-It has been a while, Sofia.” (Makoto)
      I answer awkwardly.
      “Fufufu…I heard from Eir-sama that you had woken up just recently, but it looks like you are already enjoying yourself.” (Sofia)
      Her tone is gentle, but her eyes are not smiling at all.

      Haha finally carnage scene with sofia~

      Damn the dude got triple kiss play by lucy and sa-san, getting lewded by great sage in front of his girlfriend. And lastly, he’ll get “raped” by Sofia? As expected of the virgin chad, he doesn’t need to do anything to get this kind of treatment

      Also i like the afterword, hope the author keep doing this

      1. There’s always been an afterword, just that the author removes it a few days later as a bonus to the early readers.

      2. Sofia is unexpectedly perverted, so she might do some lewd things, especially if Eir is encouraging Sofia.

        By the way, what the hell is this part ?
        “[Destiny Goddess, Ira-sama]
        She properly has her turn in the last arc, so I won’t talk about it here. ”
        What the hell did we have until now ? If we had Ira and Makoto flirting like a couple in arc 10, will they flirt like spouses in arc 11 ?

      3. @69>420
        Oh i see, glad to hear that. And since rei-sama already catching up with the raws that means we’ll get to see the afterword more often

        @savioroffrance
        Now you mention it, could it be that the author already confirmed that Ira will join Makoto harem? Damn the author just basically dropped a bomb on us the reader. Ira and Makoto flirting in front of everyone certainly have a nuclear-like destructive power

    1. Wow, Lucy and Sa-san are thirsty ! Momo chan too !

      ““Pfft, what a low level battle.” (Lucy)
      ““Hah?”” (Sa-san and Momo’s glare)
      “Hiiih!” (Lucy)
      Lucy stepped on a landmine.”
      Yup, Lucy, you stepped on a landmine !

      “Fufufu…I heard from Eir-sama that you had woken up just recently, but it looks like you are already enjoying yourself.” (Sofia)
      Incredible. Is this the pressure of the legendary legal wife ?

      “I was pulled in by her gem-like blue eyes, and by the time I noticed…I had been pushed down.”
      So Makoto is basically pushed down by his harem in this chapter.

      “She properly has her turn in the last arc, so I won’t talk about it here.
      If I had to say something, she is the one character that deviated from the plot and went wild the most.
      The reason why the releases of the 10th Arc got slower was because of this Goddess.”
      Ira-chan will have her turn in the last arc ? I ship Makoto x Ira ! Also, the releases were slower because of her ? What a Ponkotsu Goddess…

      “Momo…when did you become such a lewd girl?”
      Momo-chan became a little devil…
      https://i.imgur.com/oNPnUhP.jpg

      1. Makoto inner voices: “When did the innocent girl that I carefully raised become this kind of woman?”

        Also i just noticed, Fuji-yan has the mind-reading ability right? Wouldnt that mean he already knows about momo and Makoto’s real relationship? I hope it won’t become a plot hole

        ira is the very cause of every failure that happens on this continent. We should change her title as “Goddess of Failure” instead

        1. Maybe, Fujiyan has to use his ability in order to read the mind of others, but it’s not like he always uses it. But yeah, Fujiyan may know that Makoto and Momo are really close, but he probably doesn’t know everything about their relationship.
          A new moniker for Ira-chan, “Divine Failure” or “God fails”.

        2. Fuji-kun supposedly can read person’s inner monolog-like thoughts. Like a gal-game log. It is borderline plot hole, but let’s write it off as him not having much interactions with Momo

      2. iirc Fuji-yan’ powers express them selves as inner monologue text log(much a kin to dating sims) of those he is contact with. It isnt said how much control he has over it, but it is fairly comprehensive. That being said, i dont remember how often Fuji-yan and Momo were in contact, but it’s very possible the two to not interact enough for him to pick up on her Makoto obsession.

      3. I see mahiru, i like. Mahiru is best girl yesyes.

        Also cant wait for furiae to make her appearance again my favourite along with sofia~

      4. I think that his ability is always active as long as he doesn’t disable it by himself though. Well, I didn’t really know how it works so I may just wait for further explanation. Also, momo can drink Makoto blood without a problem right? That means he’s still a DT

      5. Didn’t Fuji-yan already guess that Momo has feelings for Makoto? I recall at one point, everybody is talking about the rumors between the two and then Momo shows up and acts close with Makoto and Fuji-yan sees it and goes, “Oh?” like if he had read her mind. He probably just isn’t going to say anything and let them deal with it themselves.

    2. Don’t call Ira-chan like that,her love advice really superb on last arc but yeah as destiny goddess she’s really sucks with rate of failure bigger than success,she should be goddess of love instead

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