Translator: Hey guys, a translator talk here š
The moment I translated the āRaidou breaksā chapter, I was sure it would explode. I was actually looking forward to what would happen and you guys definitely didnāt let me down.
All your comments were awesome. The majority were actually constructive opinions and views in different angles. Of course there will be bashing towards Makoto, and they were all interesting as well. Makoto was struck with the truth after all. We all knew he was messing up as a merchant, but for the repercussion to come in such aā¦ realistic manner. It was pretty surprising.
I honestly loved that chapter, and the reactions towards it make me love this community even more.
Keep it up guys. You are my motivation!
In the time when Princess Lily was troubled in stepping to action regarding Jin and the othersā¦
At a section of the audience, two girls wearing clothes that remarkably stand out were sighing.
Raidou- Makotoās followers, Tomoe and Mio.
The other follower, Shiki, was babysitting the students, so he was doing separate actions.
āHow boring~. When thereās this much difference in power, it isnāt a fight but a show-ja naā (Tomoe)
āThatās why I was saying so since yesterday, wasnāt I? If they were not Waka-samaās students, I wouldnāt even be here watching-desu waā (Mio)
āIf they were our students like with Shiki, we would be able to enjoy it in a different way butā¦ Mio, what is that bizarre inflated bag-ja?ā (Tomoe)
āWhat you ask, it is the specialty products of booths here and there-desu waā (Mio)
āIt is an answer, and yet it isnāt. No, what I am asking is about the amount-ja yoā (Tomoe)
At the side of Tomoe thereās Mio and further after, thereās several big light brown paper bags. Seeing that, she asks with enmity.
Mioās answer was nonchalant, and she tells her that it is all food.
But what Tomoe wanted to know, is just as she said, the amount of it.
In the seats that are supposed to be fully occupied, one of them is being totally occupied.
To protect her honor, Mio explains that this is originally the seat of Makoto and because he canāt come, she is just utilizing it in an effective way.
In no way did she put all that food because she doesnāt want anyone else to come sit there.
āI will eat it all by the time we return, so donāt mind it. If you want me to share some with you, just say it honestly okay?ā (Mio)
āI donāt need any. I feel like it might give me a heartburnā (Tomoe)
āHmph, if this were alcohol, you would take it without doubtā (Mio)
The two of them leisurely watch the team battles unfolding in the stage while doing trivial talk.
There were no matches that were worth watching, and even in the matches with Jin and the others, the opponent was so weak it wasnāt fun.
Moreover, their master Makoto was not there.
Watching those matches earnestly might be something hard to do for these two girls.
āAt this rate, I canāt expect much from tomorrowās semifinal and finals. Well, we will be able to sit along with Waka, so thatās fineā (Tomoe)
āSame-desu wa. If I am together with Waka-sama, the place doesnāt matterā (Mio)
āFumu, it seems it is done already-ja na. Muā (Tomoe)
ā¦
Tomoe and Mio notice something at the same time.
āMio, Waka is calling-ja. We are going backā (Tomoe)
āI know already-desu wa. It seems he is slightly dispirited, so letās hurryā (Mio)
Receiving a thought transmission from their master, Tomoe and Mio both nod and get up from their sits.
A short and straightforward thought transmission.
āI have something I want to consult about, so I want you to return to the companyā, is what he said.
A tone with no vigor.
While holding worry in their chest, they meet up with Shiki and return to the company.
āāāāāāāā
āFor the time being, it is fine to kill that representative-desu wa ne?ā (Mio)
āMio, the talk has not finished yet. Calm down firstā (Tomoe)
āWhat stupid thing are you saying? I am completely calm-desu wa. Canāt you see that I clearly understand what I should do?ā (Mio)
āThatās why I am telling you to wait for now. The talk has not finished yet-ja. Wait for a bitā (Tomoe)
āSuch abusive language towards Waka-samaā¦ abusive languageā¦ it wasnāt such a lukewarm level-desu wa ne? How should I kill him?ā (Mio)
āMio. I am telling you to hear what that very Waka has to say until the end-jaā (Tomoe)
After I finished telling the outline of what happened, Mio stood up and tried to leave the room.
I didnāt have the vitality to stop her immediately, so Tomoe took my place and inhibited Mio.
Even I could tell that Tomoe was looking at me with fainthearted eyes.
N?
Inhibited was it?
I feel like she didnāt stop herā¦
āAs I thought, one of us should have gone as wellā
Itās Shiki.
In terms of result, it is just as he said.
It might have been better if I had one of them accompany me.
If I had one of my followers with me, I felt like they would resolve it with strength. I thought that if that happened, then it would be pointless.
The first time Rembrandt-san met Tomoe, he was left completely speechless and was pretty withered.
I wanted to know the extent of the ill will the other merchants held towards me.
In the past, when I met Rembrandt-san the first time to give him the Ruby-eyeās eyes, it went well, so I thought maybe I would be able to hold my conversation if the other party was a merchant.
The context matched when I associated with Rembrandt-san, so even with the matter of Tomoeās level, I think I would have been able to manage it properly. But this time, the representative was someone I had no connection with.
I didnāt want to prepare something like intimidation in our first meeting.
That naĆÆve way of thinking led to this.
I was pushed into an unreasonable situation, made a fool of, and returned like a loser.
āSorry for saying something like wanting to go aloneā (Makoto)
āIf one of us were with you, thereās the chance that place would have turned into a sea of blood, so not everything is bad. Donāt mind it that muchā (Tomoe)
āWaka-sama is not in the wrong!ā (Mio)
Tomoe tries to comfort me and Mio interposes with a rebuttal.
No, no matter how you think about it, the way I dealt with it was bad.
āNow that I think about it, not a single one of us has knowledge in business. We all began as novices. There might have been more ways to deal with it if we were introduced by Rembrandt-shi and taught the basicsā (Shiki)
Not might. Thatās what we should have done.
Before that, thereās the problem that even when I myself began a company just recently, I still went and did things here and there, neglecting the business.
And in truth, the company still did well.
No, thatās how it looked.
Thatās why it brought upon more negligence.
It may be this late of a time to do so, but I have to reflect on it.
āShiki, even you! Why does Waka-sama have to feel down?! In the first place, Waka-sama was displeased by the shortage of medicines that canāt reach the hands of the people and were easily losing their life, so he aspired to spread medicines, right?! Why does he have to learn how to act around those merchants to not be resented?! He is doing something thatās good for everyone, and yet, why?! Isnāt this ridiculous?!ā (Mio)
The words of Mio that were trying to cover for me no matter what, were grinding at my heart.
Thatās right.
I wanted to sell medicine in order for everyone to have an easy way of reaching out to it.
For that reason, I wanted to do business widely without minding which country it was.
Because of circumstances, we also handle various miscellaneous goods as well, but those are just extras.
Doing something good.
Because I had that thinking in a part of me, maybe thatās why I only looked at the people I was selling to.
NotĀ doing anything excessive with the price because of people of the same trade, the counter-plans I did for the copies and resale; those were the only things I thought of.
And in truth, even the price might be questionable. We collected everything ourselves, had the people needed for the compounding, and left it to a point where we would barely escape deficit.
That isā¦ within the range?
Thatās probably not it.
Since the time the people made a rude comment of my demi-human employees, I havenāt gone to the meetings of the merchants in the area.
Lately, Akua, Eris and the eldwa craftsmen have grown more accustomed to socializing with hyumans. But, even so, it was most likely an error to not relate with the merchants around.
Ignoring association must have made the impression of Kuzunoha Company even more ominous.
Even if I have good intentions, a business is a business.
There will obviously be competition.
There will be people who would want to eliminate the ones who have the same target of customers, and if you do something that stands out, the big companies will place an eye on you.
I didnāt make a method to cope with it when something like that happened, and have continued until this day.
As expected, I canāt order to eliminate them just because they have kept an eye on us after all.
In Tsige it was different, but in Rotsgard I donāt have any backing.
In other words, I was defenseless.
āMio, thatās just idealistic talk. It isnāt just distributing. As long as we are doing a business, these kind of things happen. I wonāt say Waka has done nothing wrong, but I have to admit we were somewhat defenselessā (Tomoe)
āā¦ I hold the same opinion. Of course, it is true that I should have acted in a better way. I have no excuseā (Shiki)
ā!!! Thereās something wrong with you guys! Even though Waka-sama is the absolute rule! The stupid ones are the merchants that are only looking at the near future!ā (Mio)
Mio would most likely stand by my side no matter what happens.
Even if I were to turn into a fiend, even if I were to become the enemy of the whole world, she would still be willing to fall to the same place as I am.
Thatās why I have to put myself together.
If she falls so far, thatās all my responsibility.
As if persuading myself, I try to kill the unfair anger thatās inside me.
At the very least, I donāt think this is something that is fine to solve with just violence.
The existence of Mio who is willing to give her everything for me, prevented my current unstable emotions from rampaging.
āā¦ Waka. That representative said things that are difficult to forgive, but he also said good things. How about it? I think that since we have the chance, thereās also the option of giving up on hyumans and opening a store in the villages of demi-humansā (Tomoe)
āServing only demi-humans?ā (Makoto)
āYes. If you wish to, we can also serve demonic beasts and mamonos. Also, Waka told me, that you wanted the four seasons. I donāt think Waka likes conflict, so you probably intent to have a relationship with the demon race in order to secure that place right? Then, I think it should be fine to do business with them. Continuing business in the hyuman society and having our hearts crushed, it would only create more weight in Waka, and I donāt think thatās a good ideaā (Tomoe)
āThe demon race publicly hates hyumans, but they are generous towards other races. I think the proposal of Tomoe-dono is worth consideringā (Shiki)
āIā¦ donāt understand complicated stuff. But I donāt think thereās a need for Waka-sama to be under people that just want to take advantage of Waka-samaās kindnessā (Mio)
ā¦
Kindness huh.
Maybe I was looking at it that way in some part of me.
And, maybe the people around saw it that way as well.
āIā¦ā (Makoto)
āWaka, please tell us what you are currently thinking. If Waka so wishes, we will fight with whoever. Alsoā¦ we will lower our heads to whoever you wish us toā (Tomoe)
Mio and Shiki nod at Tomoeās words.
Right. Thereās no need to hide anything from them.
They are my family in this world after all.
āā¦ Just like I promised to Tomoe, I plan on having a connection with the demon race. After a conversation with one of the demon generals, I promised a meeting with the Demon Lord. It will be after the school festival is over, but I intent to meet with the Demon Lord and ask it to let me take over or borrow one location where Tomoe says the four seasons are inā (Makoto)
I resolve myself and tell the three what I was thinking.
Tomoe nods with a joyful look and glittering eyes.
Shiki looks like he consents. He silently nods with his eyes closed.
Mio simply accepted my words and was smiling.
āIf that happens, it will create a big debt towards the demon race. Talking to the demon lord. I canāt say anything definite, but I donāt think it will end in a simple manner. Will the hegemony of this world continue in the hands of the Goddess and hyumans, or will it be plundered by the demon race? We might even have to participate in that conflict. If I had to speak my ideal scenario, it may be naĆÆve, but it would be to hold a connection with the demon race while continuing business with the hyumans. But depending on the situation, I donāt know what would happenā (Makoto)
I bring a world map from the shelf and spread it on the desk. And then, I place a hand on the location Tomoe pointed out before.
āThis was the place right, Tomoe?ā (Makoto)
āYes. Thatās the placeā (Tomoe)
āThe previously associated country of Elysion, Kaleneon. The place is around Yamagata prefecture and Tsukiyama huhā (Makoto)
The place that will provide Asora with the four seasons.
And also the place that is deeply connected with the two hyumans I met.
āYamagata?ā (Tomoe)
āNothing. Just pointless rambling. Whatās important is what I said before that. Itās a country named Kaleneon. That placeā¦ seems to be the native country of my parentsā (Makoto)
ā?!ā
āMy parents met there, and after that, they became adventurers, traveled, and transferred to my world. In other words, to me, it is also my home in a sense. Of course, that has nothing to do with the four seasons, so it is fine to ignore that point for nowā (Makoto)
I have no emotional attachment at all anyways.
If possible, I would be happy to obtain even a little bit of information of my parents, but it is a country that has fallen to ruin.
The demon race probably knows more information of Kaleneon.
If they didnāt turn everything into ash when they invaded that is.
āBut Waka-sama, if I remember correctly, Kaleneon is the place the librarian Eva and Gotetsuās Ruriaā¦ā (Shiki)
As if remembering something, Shiki says the name of the Ansland sisters.
āThatās right. The birthplace of those girls. Thatās why I had each of them decide something. If both of them accept, Iā¦ā (Makoto)
I tell the three of them what I was thinking.
Thatās my last resort.
It may be a foolish thought that canāt even be called resort though.
Butā¦
āFuā¦ fufufu. Isnāt that interesting, Waka?ā (Tomoe)
āRight. Depending on how it is done, it might even become a card to solve our current problemā (Shiki)
āIf itās something Waka-sama has decided, I donāt have any objections. Also, I think it is stupid to not use the strength we have and just worryā (Mio)
My family accepted it.
In that case, as Kuzunoha Companyās Raidou, and also, as the third one to descend to this worldā¦
Well, the two heroes are in the hyuman side, so it should be fine for one to be behind-the-scenes on the demon race side right, bug Goddess?
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ēē --- Just waiting for that to come around...
ēéē --- Or that >.> Since he already is Devil
ah! i can't believe it, their decision was as expected...
(i said i had an idea for what's coming last chapter)
well i can't really take credit for something i did not publicly say...
besides... all clues/hints pointed towards that decision... so i was just walking the path the author lead me to...
thanks so much for the update!!! :D much appreciated... God bless you!!!
Hm, didn't Raidou say that his resupply method is teleportation and that he has someone who has huge magical power to use it?
My hypothesis is this:
That representative is gonna tell Raidou's resupply method to the other merchants.
The Big Shots will try to search for information on who that individual is.
When they fail that, they'll just kidnap someone who has a deep knowledge on the inner workings on Kuzunoha. Tomoe and Mio are out, since even just one of them can bring total annihilation to their doorstep (And they have a bone to pick with the merchants). Guessing it'll be Shiki or one of the dwarves.
Makoto hears about it.
The next Chapter will read "Raidou goes nuclear on their asses".
I doubt they can kidnap Shiki, he's a former Lich and got stronger by making a pact with Makoto, he's the weakest out of the 4 but by no means someone like a mere hyuman can harm(even the heroes will probably get their asses hauled as well).
Would have to agree with Shiki not being all that harmable. When Mio was annoyed with him because his creation damaged her kimono she apparently skinned him, repeatedly. I doubt there are many that could do much to him without his letting them.
Maybe Shiki will let them kidnap him, then use their communication method to inform Makoto where he's been taken.
Makoto will then get Rembrandt to act on his behalf in contacting the proper authorities to help "rescue" Shiki (and catch the perpetrators red handed).
While that is being put into work, Makoto will get the rest of his subordinates to quickly figure out who is the "mastermind" behind this incident, and have them kidnapped and planted next to Shiki just before the authorities storm the location, thus making sure the one who gave the orders will be caught.
After all, they're still some big shot merchants. We should give them enough credit not to expect them to be foolish enough to personally attend the interrogation.
I find it slightly amusing that he would always go on about trying to prevent things from existing but then when he gets hit in the face with how naive he is. He breaks down.
If he has the resolve to prevent other countries from doing things that he dislikes why doesn't just do the easiest thing and just kill the representative?
I mean he is basically already a Crime Boss, no matter what he thinks.
*waiting for hate*
It will not solve the root of the problem thus creating new troubles and fueling more hatred pointed towards him unless you want to be hated. Since it has come to that anyway he should've just done what the representative told him and be a madlad
>side with demi humans and demon race
>destroy cities one by one
>if asked why he is siding with the demon race answer because the merchant's guild told him to
He should've just done what the representative told him and be a madlad
>side with demi humans and demon race
>destroy cities one by one
>if asked why he is siding with the demon race answer because the merchant's guild told him to
Bored and since it seems to anger you
Would like to say you are a ass and hypocritical
*wait for his answer if he is still active and hypocritical answer*
Almost everytime i read this lad/gal comment ... It end up as comment brawl
*grabs a popcorn ~NomNomNom
He could also sell everything for free just to fuck with the guild
Killing the representative is not about being the easiest or the smartest. Its just pointless. It would bring absolutely no benefits to them other than getting revenge for badmouthing him (which he partially deserved and also its isn't a reason to kill someone over it).
It wasn't the representative who started this or was pulling the strings. Its not like he is some kind of evil criminal lord trying to extort the company. They used underhanded but still somehow legal (or at least the ones in power are making it legal this time) methods to corner them. This time the whole merchant guild is against them, forced by those other powers.
The moment the Kuzunoha company resorts to violence they lose all their remaining rights and will be dealt like a criminal organization and they can just destroy it (well or at least they can try). That moment they already abandoned being merchants.
There are really few who know their real military power so no one considers them a threat that can't be removed by those countries and big companies.
The only way he could benefit from making them fear him is if he showcases their power in a national level and demonstrates that not even the big countries can oppose him. Only if he achieves that no one in that world would dare to go against him (not even the goddess) would let him to use that in his benefit as a merchant.
But at that point it would be already easier to just plunder and conquer and it would make all their efforts to stay hidden so far pointless.
Just bored and read a little and must say TheFactualGamer is hypocritical in so many ways it was fun to read
Children, just shut the F*** up.
*licks comments
HOLY SHIT THIS IS SALTY
I'm not reading any of that, not just because it's most likely completely wrong and foolish but also because my comment is 3 months old and I don't care what you have to say.
I know that my comment is right, the only reason why you're replying to me is because you're being irrational because someone doesn't agree with your misconceptions.
Good day to you.
:^)
For someone not caring you sure wrote a long reply XD
Also are you a child or what? If you are just trying to troll thats not how its done, its supposed to be funny in some way (and not pathetic like this).
Who is the one being irrational and foolish here replying because someone disagreed with your lacking logic? I guess you are the one.
Just because you know you are wrong and can't say anything to prove you are right you can't just proclaim that "hurr durr i am right and you are wrong" and then expect others to agree with you..
>calling someone else a child
>getting upset because someone pointed out how dumb they're being
Mhmmmmm go read Naruto you filthy casual.
:^)
I called you a child because you act like on and i didn't want to call you and idiot right from the start. You were the one who started insulting others.
You can't even argue to defend your dumb ideas so instead you do nothing but insult others.
I'm only getting upset about how retarded you are.
As i said, you can't just proclaim that you are right (when you are obviously not) without at least trying to explain why. Only dumb and/or crazy people do that and really expect that others will agree with them.
Tell me the reasons why you think you are right and i am wrong?
If you're wondering why I'm so hostile. It's because I literally told you that the post was 3 months old and you're questioning me on something that is explained in the novel itself. I thought you were trying to be a nuisance.
Why he should killed the merchant ad how it helps him.
How about you read ahead and find out what why yourself. They even explain why doing it is a good idea.
I'm not here to educate kids like you. Especially on something as simple as
As i said I knew I was right from the beginning.
Only a narcissistic Cretin like you will go out of their way to bother someone over something as stupid as disagreeing with them on a post. Especially after I specifically told you that I don't care what you think.
I just said I haven't actually read any of your posts.
So you replying to me is just you stroking your own ego.
You're calling me a child. When you're the one being a little cunt. Now fuck off.
Are you seriously saying that to me? You are the one attacking me for having a different opinion than you. So all that you just said is just describing you.
Now i reached chapter 151 and i see no explanation of why would have been better to kill that representative.
I don't know what were you reading but it actually confirmed what i said.
They just had to showcase their power in front of the influencial people to intimidate them a little. Just killing some merchant wont achieve that.
They had to show their power without antagonizing them too much because if they are considered too much of a threat than their only option will be to try eliminating that threat.
In the end they might just turn that representative Zara into one of their allies with Rembrandt's help.
You got issues kid
Calm down kid
You have been reading to many Wuxia novels killing everyone and striking fear into the hearts of everyone isn't exactly how the world goes round, at the heart of it, it does but if some random no body comes in gets insulted and kills a representative it doesn't strike fear into their hearts its strikes anger and the need for retaliation.
Obviously you have said it isn't the smartest choice and all, but it also isn't the simplest. The best route is to say: Fine bite the hand that feeds? I'll just go feed someone else and you can just suffer.
also, you obviously didn't read my posts because I didn't saying anything it being the smartest choice. kid. I said easiest.
You say that but I can barely read your post.
Huh? How would killing the representative do anything?
Well, besides make a whole lot of people feel a lot better.
I think what @Psy meant was, what would it accomplish other than scaring the guild? will it change how the merchants/nobles that complained about his store see him?
the Representative is only "still" a representative of the Merchant Guild. He's replaceable. Makoto said it's misplaced "anger". It should be the merchants who is antagonizinh his store that be culled not the representative that is only doing his job. At least that's my opinion.
I never said it was the best or smartest thing to do.
He fucked up.
Should have killed him right away, and so the guild would fear him.
Easiest thing to do. Not the best or most peaceful.
But that's what I expect from him at this point.
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MWAHAHAHAHAH! That's right, Makoto, go for it!
It's good to see Makoto reflecting on his actions until now, and on what the merc. rep. said. I hope for some improvement on that front!
I like how Tomoe always prioritizes Makoto's heart's well being.
Even so, his ressentment towards the Bug is spreading towards hyumans in general... good, good, the dark side is Strong in this one! XDDDDDDD Well, a race influenced by that bitch will certainly look down on him by default. Whether by WN general tendencies or by simple logic, joining the demon side was unavoidable from the very start! That stupid Bug dug her own grave...
You know, I kind of wonder.
Between the demon race and hyuman race, which is closer to humans?
Hyumans aside, the Bug goddess seems to have inadvertently created the sort of environment humans evolved in for demons.
Complete lack of a god's blessings, a barren homeland that's difficult to grow and cultivate in, a need to polish one's wisdom just to survive...
Hmmm... in terms of biology, hyumans. In terms of culture and not being dumb, demons for sure LOL
No, biologically too, I find it questionable.
Outwardly, I suppose so(though hyuman beauty is also kind of unnatural). But we need to set humans's strength to scale in this world-that is, heroes like Trashmoki(Hibiki is too excellent and Makoto is kind of frail normally). Humans in this world would, as a standard, be several times stronger and have better physical specs overall. When you compare to hyumans...
Oh, no! I was so happy I forgot something ESSENCIAL!
THANK YOU VERY MUCH, REIGOKAI! I thought I would be fretting another day over this! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
Im with mio in this one!
Burn the world!
How dare they insult waka
The hyumans are stupid. Antagonize someone who provide better advanced pharmaceutical products... they don't think of what could happen when he or she turn yo your enemies making them stronger? It's a case of having eyes and not seeing mount Tai. About the neutral zone, I don't think it's feasible becquse of the level of stupidity of the hyumans who would attack anyway because they would be prompted by the church to do so or some other country who realize that a dangerous company side with the demons.
Hahaha, I qant to see what happens when the limia and princess Lily get told what happened with the merchant guild.
Oh~~ Makoto declare war to the bug....
Now I am getting impatient. What the hell is he want them to decide.
I think Makoto could conquer the world without attacking either of the two sides.
He just needs to create his own nation that accepts anyone, be they hyuman, demi-hyuman, or demon. Then while the two sides wage war on each other, those that are tired of the war would just migrate to Makoto's nation.
He has the strength to win any battle, so he can afford to remain on the defensive at all times. Both sides would learn that lesson quickly and would leave him alone, because they would have no other choice.
Eventually, too few people would remain on both sides and they'd collapse.
that would be Asora.
"Heās not willing to bring everyone into Asora."
if so;
"those that are tired of the war would just migrate to Makotoās world, Asora."
"He puts everyone through a vetting process to make sure theyāll fit in."
else if;
"Asora, would be a nation that anyone could come to, and would be known to all."
forgive my laziness but my phone is acting up tonight, so I just quoted you, since you addressed the process yourself already. You mentioned filtering, so either method is put ibto action, he's already not going to accept everyone.
I don't know if it's me misunderstanding you, or the other way around. Anyway...
The nation I mentioned would be a separate entity to Asora. It would be land in the same world that the hyuman and demon nations already exist, except it would be under Makoto's rule, instead of those other parties.
Asora would still be there, but where he would continue to be very discriminating in whom he accepts into Asora, that nation would be open to anyone.
He's not willing to bring everyone into Asora. He puts everyone through a vetting process to make sure they'll fit in.
This would be a nation that anyone could come to, and would be known to all.
Asora will likely remain a secret for a long time, or at least until after he deals with the bug.