Translator: Hey guys, a translator talk here đ
The moment I translated the âRaidou breaksâ chapter, I was sure it would explode. I was actually looking forward to what would happen and you guys definitely didnât let me down.
All your comments were awesome. The majority were actually constructive opinions and views in different angles. Of course there will be bashing towards Makoto, and they were all interesting as well. Makoto was struck with the truth after all. We all knew he was messing up as a merchant, but for the repercussion to come in such a⌠realistic manner. It was pretty surprising.
I honestly loved that chapter, and the reactions towards it make me love this community even more.
Keep it up guys. You are my motivation!
In the time when Princess Lily was troubled in stepping to action regarding Jin and the othersâŚ
At a section of the audience, two girls wearing clothes that remarkably stand out were sighing.
Raidou- Makotoâs followers, Tomoe and Mio.
The other follower, Shiki, was babysitting the students, so he was doing separate actions.
âHow boring~. When thereâs this much difference in power, it isnât a fight but a show-ja naâ (Tomoe)
âThatâs why I was saying so since yesterday, wasnât I? If they were not Waka-samaâs students, I wouldnât even be here watching-desu waâ (Mio)
âIf they were our students like with Shiki, we would be able to enjoy it in a different way but⌠Mio, what is that bizarre inflated bag-ja?â (Tomoe)
âWhat you ask, it is the specialty products of booths here and there-desu waâ (Mio)
âIt is an answer, and yet it isnât. No, what I am asking is about the amount-ja yoâ (Tomoe)
At the side of Tomoe thereâs Mio and further after, thereâs several big light brown paper bags. Seeing that, she asks with enmity.
Mioâs answer was nonchalant, and she tells her that it is all food.
But what Tomoe wanted to know, is just as she said, the amount of it.
In the seats that are supposed to be fully occupied, one of them is being totally occupied.
To protect her honor, Mio explains that this is originally the seat of Makoto and because he canât come, she is just utilizing it in an effective way.
In no way did she put all that food because she doesnât want anyone else to come sit there.
âI will eat it all by the time we return, so donât mind it. If you want me to share some with you, just say it honestly okay?â (Mio)
âI donât need any. I feel like it might give me a heartburnâ (Tomoe)
âHmph, if this were alcohol, you would take it without doubtâ (Mio)
The two of them leisurely watch the team battles unfolding in the stage while doing trivial talk.
There were no matches that were worth watching, and even in the matches with Jin and the others, the opponent was so weak it wasnât fun.
Moreover, their master Makoto was not there.
Watching those matches earnestly might be something hard to do for these two girls.
âAt this rate, I canât expect much from tomorrowâs semifinal and finals. Well, we will be able to sit along with Waka, so thatâs fineâ (Tomoe)
âSame-desu wa. If I am together with Waka-sama, the place doesnât matterâ (Mio)
âFumu, it seems it is done already-ja na. Muâ (Tomoe)
âŚ
Tomoe and Mio notice something at the same time.
âMio, Waka is calling-ja. We are going backâ (Tomoe)
âI know already-desu wa. It seems he is slightly dispirited, so letâs hurryâ (Mio)
Receiving a thought transmission from their master, Tomoe and Mio both nod and get up from their sits.
A short and straightforward thought transmission.
âI have something I want to consult about, so I want you to return to the companyâ, is what he said.
A tone with no vigor.
While holding worry in their chest, they meet up with Shiki and return to the company.
ââââââââ
âFor the time being, it is fine to kill that representative-desu wa ne?â (Mio)
âMio, the talk has not finished yet. Calm down firstâ (Tomoe)
âWhat stupid thing are you saying? I am completely calm-desu wa. Canât you see that I clearly understand what I should do?â (Mio)
âThatâs why I am telling you to wait for now. The talk has not finished yet-ja. Wait for a bitâ (Tomoe)
âSuch abusive language towards Waka-sama⌠abusive language⌠it wasnât such a lukewarm level-desu wa ne? How should I kill him?â (Mio)
âMio. I am telling you to hear what that very Waka has to say until the end-jaâ (Tomoe)
After I finished telling the outline of what happened, Mio stood up and tried to leave the room.
I didnât have the vitality to stop her immediately, so Tomoe took my place and inhibited Mio.
Even I could tell that Tomoe was looking at me with fainthearted eyes.
N?
Inhibited was it?
I feel like she didnât stop herâŚ
âAs I thought, one of us should have gone as wellâ
Itâs Shiki.
In terms of result, it is just as he said.
It might have been better if I had one of them accompany me.
If I had one of my followers with me, I felt like they would resolve it with strength. I thought that if that happened, then it would be pointless.
The first time Rembrandt-san met Tomoe, he was left completely speechless and was pretty withered.
I wanted to know the extent of the ill will the other merchants held towards me.
In the past, when I met Rembrandt-san the first time to give him the Ruby-eyeâs eyes, it went well, so I thought maybe I would be able to hold my conversation if the other party was a merchant.
The context matched when I associated with Rembrandt-san, so even with the matter of Tomoeâs level, I think I would have been able to manage it properly. But this time, the representative was someone I had no connection with.
I didnât want to prepare something like intimidation in our first meeting.
That naĂŻve way of thinking led to this.
I was pushed into an unreasonable situation, made a fool of, and returned like a loser.
âSorry for saying something like wanting to go aloneâ (Makoto)
âIf one of us were with you, thereâs the chance that place would have turned into a sea of blood, so not everything is bad. Donât mind it that muchâ (Tomoe)
âWaka-sama is not in the wrong!â (Mio)
Tomoe tries to comfort me and Mio interposes with a rebuttal.
No, no matter how you think about it, the way I dealt with it was bad.
âNow that I think about it, not a single one of us has knowledge in business. We all began as novices. There might have been more ways to deal with it if we were introduced by Rembrandt-shi and taught the basicsâ (Shiki)
Not might. Thatâs what we should have done.
Before that, thereâs the problem that even when I myself began a company just recently, I still went and did things here and there, neglecting the business.
And in truth, the company still did well.
No, thatâs how it looked.
Thatâs why it brought upon more negligence.
It may be this late of a time to do so, but I have to reflect on it.
âShiki, even you! Why does Waka-sama have to feel down?! In the first place, Waka-sama was displeased by the shortage of medicines that canât reach the hands of the people and were easily losing their life, so he aspired to spread medicines, right?! Why does he have to learn how to act around those merchants to not be resented?! He is doing something thatâs good for everyone, and yet, why?! Isnât this ridiculous?!â (Mio)
The words of Mio that were trying to cover for me no matter what, were grinding at my heart.
Thatâs right.
I wanted to sell medicine in order for everyone to have an easy way of reaching out to it.
For that reason, I wanted to do business widely without minding which country it was.
Because of circumstances, we also handle various miscellaneous goods as well, but those are just extras.
Doing something good.
Because I had that thinking in a part of me, maybe thatâs why I only looked at the people I was selling to.
Not doing anything excessive with the price because of people of the same trade, the counter-plans I did for the copies and resale; those were the only things I thought of.
And in truth, even the price might be questionable. We collected everything ourselves, had the people needed for the compounding, and left it to a point where we would barely escape deficit.
That is⌠within the range?
Thatâs probably not it.
Since the time the people made a rude comment of my demi-human employees, I havenât gone to the meetings of the merchants in the area.
Lately, Akua, Eris and the eldwa craftsmen have grown more accustomed to socializing with hyumans. But, even so, it was most likely an error to not relate with the merchants around.
Ignoring association must have made the impression of Kuzunoha Company even more ominous.
Even if I have good intentions, a business is a business.
There will obviously be competition.
There will be people who would want to eliminate the ones who have the same target of customers, and if you do something that stands out, the big companies will place an eye on you.
I didnât make a method to cope with it when something like that happened, and have continued until this day.
As expected, I canât order to eliminate them just because they have kept an eye on us after all.
In Tsige it was different, but in Rotsgard I donât have any backing.
In other words, I was defenseless.
âMio, thatâs just idealistic talk. It isnât just distributing. As long as we are doing a business, these kind of things happen. I wonât say Waka has done nothing wrong, but I have to admit we were somewhat defenselessâ (Tomoe)
â⌠I hold the same opinion. Of course, it is true that I should have acted in a better way. I have no excuseâ (Shiki)
â!!! Thereâs something wrong with you guys! Even though Waka-sama is the absolute rule! The stupid ones are the merchants that are only looking at the near future!â (Mio)
Mio would most likely stand by my side no matter what happens.
Even if I were to turn into a fiend, even if I were to become the enemy of the whole world, she would still be willing to fall to the same place as I am.
Thatâs why I have to put myself together.
If she falls so far, thatâs all my responsibility.
As if persuading myself, I try to kill the unfair anger thatâs inside me.
At the very least, I donât think this is something that is fine to solve with just violence.
The existence of Mio who is willing to give her everything for me, prevented my current unstable emotions from rampaging.
â⌠Waka. That representative said things that are difficult to forgive, but he also said good things. How about it? I think that since we have the chance, thereâs also the option of giving up on hyumans and opening a store in the villages of demi-humansâ (Tomoe)
âServing only demi-humans?â (Makoto)
âYes. If you wish to, we can also serve demonic beasts and mamonos. Also, Waka told me, that you wanted the four seasons. I donât think Waka likes conflict, so you probably intent to have a relationship with the demon race in order to secure that place right? Then, I think it should be fine to do business with them. Continuing business in the hyuman society and having our hearts crushed, it would only create more weight in Waka, and I donât think thatâs a good ideaâ (Tomoe)
âThe demon race publicly hates hyumans, but they are generous towards other races. I think the proposal of Tomoe-dono is worth consideringâ (Shiki)
âI⌠donât understand complicated stuff. But I donât think thereâs a need for Waka-sama to be under people that just want to take advantage of Waka-samaâs kindnessâ (Mio)
âŚ
Kindness huh.
Maybe I was looking at it that way in some part of me.
And, maybe the people around saw it that way as well.
âIâŚâ (Makoto)
âWaka, please tell us what you are currently thinking. If Waka so wishes, we will fight with whoever. Also⌠we will lower our heads to whoever you wish us toâ (Tomoe)
Mio and Shiki nod at Tomoeâs words.
Right. Thereâs no need to hide anything from them.
They are my family in this world after all.
â⌠Just like I promised to Tomoe, I plan on having a connection with the demon race. After a conversation with one of the demon generals, I promised a meeting with the Demon Lord. It will be after the school festival is over, but I intent to meet with the Demon Lord and ask it to let me take over or borrow one location where Tomoe says the four seasons are inâ (Makoto)
I resolve myself and tell the three what I was thinking.
Tomoe nods with a joyful look and glittering eyes.
Shiki looks like he consents. He silently nods with his eyes closed.
Mio simply accepted my words and was smiling.
âIf that happens, it will create a big debt towards the demon race. Talking to the demon lord. I canât say anything definite, but I donât think it will end in a simple manner. Will the hegemony of this world continue in the hands of the Goddess and hyumans, or will it be plundered by the demon race? We might even have to participate in that conflict. If I had to speak my ideal scenario, it may be naĂŻve, but it would be to hold a connection with the demon race while continuing business with the hyumans. But depending on the situation, I donât know what would happenâ (Makoto)
I bring a world map from the shelf and spread it on the desk. And then, I place a hand on the location Tomoe pointed out before.
âThis was the place right, Tomoe?â (Makoto)
âYes. Thatâs the placeâ (Tomoe)
âThe previously associated country of Elysion, Kaleneon. The place is around Yamagata prefecture and Tsukiyama huhâ (Makoto)
The place that will provide Asora with the four seasons.
And also the place that is deeply connected with the two hyumans I met.
âYamagata?â (Tomoe)
âNothing. Just pointless rambling. Whatâs important is what I said before that. Itâs a country named Kaleneon. That place⌠seems to be the native country of my parentsâ (Makoto)
â?!â
âMy parents met there, and after that, they became adventurers, traveled, and transferred to my world. In other words, to me, it is also my home in a sense. Of course, that has nothing to do with the four seasons, so it is fine to ignore that point for nowâ (Makoto)
I have no emotional attachment at all anyways.
If possible, I would be happy to obtain even a little bit of information of my parents, but it is a country that has fallen to ruin.
The demon race probably knows more information of Kaleneon.
If they didnât turn everything into ash when they invaded that is.
âBut Waka-sama, if I remember correctly, Kaleneon is the place the librarian Eva and Gotetsuâs RuriaâŚâ (Shiki)
As if remembering something, Shiki says the name of the Ansland sisters.
âThatâs right. The birthplace of those girls. Thatâs why I had each of them decide something. If both of them accept, IâŚâ (Makoto)
I tell the three of them what I was thinking.
Thatâs my last resort.
It may be a foolish thought that canât even be called resort though.
ButâŚ
âFu⌠fufufu. Isnât that interesting, Waka?â (Tomoe)
âRight. Depending on how it is done, it might even become a card to solve our current problemâ (Shiki)
âIf itâs something Waka-sama has decided, I donât have any objections. Also, I think it is stupid to not use the strength we have and just worryâ (Mio)
My family accepted it.
In that case, as Kuzunoha Companyâs Raidou, and also, as the third one to descend to this worldâŚ
Well, the two heroes are in the hyuman side, so it should be fine for one to be behind-the-scenes on the demon race side right, bug Goddess?
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Fuvk yeah ~ !! i love it.... finally Demon Country ~ !!!
i've seen enough the rotten side of "Humans" from this and others novel... its rare to see from Demon POV ~
Seriously what i say was a joking..... dont tell me he really ask them to be his queen and 2nd...... but makoto as a 3rd power or a demon side would be fun. Now if only the student would sing. I will follow u song
Finally he notice his naive thoughts, i really wanted to someone bash reality to his face just so makoto will grow up.
You know, people always say naive this or that about protagonists and are often glad when they shape up.
But if you think about it, losing naivete is a very tragic thing. It marks hitting the brick wall of reality for the first time and having to compromise child-like ideals. More importantly, it treats things as if "the world was meant to be this way" while cutting out "the world shouldn't be this way".
Anyone know a decent web novel where the MC preserves idealism with wisdom somehow?
Well said Schattenbach.
Idealism without wisdom and competence is naivete. The goal shouldn't accepting the "real world" with a cynical realism so much as it should be the "ideal idealism" you described.
My point is that people-more tragic when it's authors-often mistake growing out of naivete with removing idealism.
Like here, Makoto was naive, and this is a wake-up call to lose that. But there's a difference between not bothering to distribute his miracle medicine to hyumans anymore(which is essentially giving up on hyumans) and trying again more wisely(with countermeasures in place). People are celebrating Makoto embracing his dark side, but I'm hoping for the latter to happen instead.
I'll check out the disciple story.
Death march doesn't count. Satou gets to keep everything without having to balance anything because of his cheat skills. It does not count.
It's perfectky possible to be both idealistic and competent ... idealism and naivete aren't the same.
Naivete is often only a specific form of ignorance while idealism doesn't necessarily includes ignorance in and itself but is about how things are ought to be from the point of view of the person holding those ideals. That point of view might be naive due to the ignorance of the person in question due to specific circumstances, but becoming aware of one's own ignorance in regard to those circumstances is exactly what allows those "ideals" to grow into even more "ideal" forms.
death march
My Disciple Died Yet Again. MC makes serious efforts in that direction.
*Finished reading the chapter*
*Remembers Something Important*
*Reads the Title of the Volume*
HOLY FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU--!!
A puppet country that provides stealth backing to the demons?
Gonna impress the Demon King by making another lake?
Completely Disappear from the hyuman grid, without leaving anything behind?
Meeting with the Royalties and Heroes?
More Death and Rebirth to overpower the BUG(Bitch Ugly Goddess)?
So many questions!~
Welp, can we call this a BIG or small character development for Makoto? Anyways, If he's gonna provide his goods and services to the Demon Race, the hyumans are as good as f*cked.
Hm, just to be safe, he should provide items to safeguard Rembrandt Company, his 7 students and his associates in Tsige in case he decides to go nuclear on everyone else's ass. Or just invite them to Asora.
Fine, the rest of the "good" hyumans can join in.
BUT I WANT BLOOD TO BE SPILLED, DAMMIT!!! >:D
Not really related to you comment, but I'm wondering now. Are most of the comments racist against hyumankind?
They might be fine with polygamy but the defaut seems to be many wives for one husband, not many husbands. There is no mention of another mother figure and it would probably have been mentioned. The wives past the 1st and 2nd seem to be more of trophy status and are not expected to be part of the close relationship, it's why all the proposals to Raidou were for position 3+.
I would also have expected the Goddess to have rejected him and demanded one of the daughters if he was not the child of both of the transferees, I would expect the Bug to go for any loophole she could to get her hands on something pretty. She checked his lineage though and found that he was their child and so had to accept him as proper payment for their debt to her, even if she didn't want him.
@IamMe: Well, I'm not sure if it would count as evidence, but hyumans seem perfectly fine with polygamy after all. Makoto's parents could be in a perfectly happy marriage while still seeing other people due to culture clash.
To chalk Makoto's appearance off as unlucky genetics seems...bizarre.
@Psychronia: You have it mostly right with the exception of the 2nd daughter. She was born after the Goddesses blessing had faded but her parents bodies had adjusted so she ended up mostly normal human in ability. Her appearence is just genetic result of 2 beautiful people having a child. The elder sister was born when the parents still had most of the Goddesss blessing and gained enough of it to survive without much trouble. Makoto was born after the blessing had faded but before his parents had fully adjusted so he ended up weak to just about everything, his appearance is probably just a genetic throwback to an ancestor. A lot of people have put forth the affair theory but there is no evidence of it, she was quite happy with her husband, and if he was not the full child of the two the Goddess would have noticed when she checked. She could not believe that he was the child of the 2 because of his looks and if he had been the product of an affair the Goddess would have likely made a fuss about that.
The Goddess normally has no access to Earth so she is unable to bless anything there, the enviroment also seems to block most of a gods blessing making it even more impossible.
The manga showed just how weak Makoto was btw, among the problems he had growing up were:
He broke bones when he tried to learn Judo.
When he first went to learn archery he actually managed to cut himself on the bow string trying to draw it. He was too weak to pull back a childs strength bow and trying to do so cut him enough that he was bleeding a fair amount. He spend a lot of time building his strength up with basic training before he got to the point he is at now.
The main difference of the Hyumans and Humans is in their physical power and the way they were brought up. From 2-3 years of age they are given the ability to speak and interact with others and are taught that they are the only blessed race and that the rest are to be used and discarded or are nothing more then animals. Anything that does not conform to the standard is worthless and its perfectly fine to get rid of it. Fellow Hyumans are meant to be exploited and used to the limit, with death not being a deterrent.
The exceptions are the ones that have mostly thrown off the Goddess Churchs teachings and can accept that others have value. In this Amelia is actually not much different from the rest of the rabble that makes up the Hyumans as she still thinks only on looks and value, with looks being of top importance, although she has some respect for Raidous power she is only interested in Shiki who has power and beauty. The sisters were not really raised in the Churches teachings and the curse disease removed their hangup on appearence. Jin seems to repect anyone with ability and ther others seem to lean his way as well.
Actually, on that topic...can someone confirm Makoto's origins for me? Things got confusing over time.
From what I understand: Makoto's parents traveled to Earth and managed to survive there with the blessing of the goddess(does that make them graunts incidentally?). Their two daughters were born beautiful and thus were similarly given goddess's blessings and grew up healthy. On top of that, Oneechan was born with greater blessings due to her parents' bodies not adjusting to Earth yet(possibly being conceived in the old world) while Imouto was born after her parents adjusted, so she got to grow up nice and healthy.
Makoto was born in the transitionary period between these two with neither a hyuman's affinity with the goddess nor a human's strong body so he grew up a frail child. For some reason, he was also born with a more normal face, and thus didn't get the goddess's blessing either. Altogether, he had the roughest environment growing up and became a bit of a monster when he miraculously survived. The reason for his face is....bad luck? Or maybe his mom had an affair with a human?
@Kortodo Hahaha. So the exceptions like Rembrant, Rinon, and such are "one of the good ones" then? XP
It's not racist. It's a fact! Hyumans are not humans. They're just flawed copies! Even their name is a typo. :P
I think it's:
55% Racist
35% Makoto Bashing
10% Mix of Both
Demons better not piss him off either.
Can't wait for the whole world and the bug to learn true fear.
Thanks for the chapter!
While closing the store he should go public with why he had to shut down. Kill the currupt in a straight punch. Deliver a hook to the Guild representative. Thanks Guild's gonna tumble down. Hehehehehehe #evillaughter
After all a loss of goods and merchandise will be a blow to the Guild and the countries no matter how small. This won't affect Kuzunoha Company much as long as they go public with "Guild trying to frame us, loot us and trying deprive poor citizen off of the medicine and equipment."
Hahahahahahahahaha!
Did Makoto just... simply decide to join the demons already? Ooohhh I can just imagine his students being like the hyuman heroes and then finding the true final boss to be their teacher.
"You... You killed our teacher!"
"No, *removes mask* I am your teacher!"
Thanks for the chapter by the way!
I actually find it really sad that the students might have to say goodbye to their precious Raidou-sensei. Especially after they've earned qualifications to assist teaching other students.
I hope they either stay in touch, or we at least get to see a heartfelt farewell where Makoto drops all pretenses of strictness and congratulates them all kindly.
There is the possibility that the student follow Raidou to make a new country, getting stronger than the heroes and demon race. Just as I hope
He could always invite them to join Asora, like Lime did. He could definitely use more hymans there - ones that are not blinded by the bug.
In fact, he should do it regardless of whether he's staying or leaving, and at least 3 of his students will definitely accept it (Rembrandt girls because of Raidou and Amelia because of Shiki), the others are also very likely.
Really thanks for the chapter, there's many question......really makoto act like a brat?Seems the war come fast.....and probably the chance to kill Hibiki o see it killed from the demon race growt much......a new time to grow inside for Makoto if this arise.Makoto don't let your feelings to guide you if you dont want suffer more and more ^_^ search a negotiate to Hyumans and demons for peace and collaboration, this was really a Big crush on the Bug Goddess!
hibiki? she's a hero worth enough to respect. tomoki, on the other hand, deserves another name: "trashmoki".
but yeah i'd love tto see a battle royale between superpowers. Makoto Tomoe Mio Shiki, Demon lord + underlings, cockroach + trash, Hibiki.
where's my popcorn??
The Goddess enhanced her physical strength and gave her strong magic power, on top of that she gave her the charisma to attract other people and conferred her a sacred treasure. (Chapter 30)
It's true that she is someone charismatic and capable but the Bug enhanced those attributes to abnormal levels, it's the same with Tomoki he was attractive to the girls and bullied for that.
What I'm trying to say is that if both heroes summon points were reversed we might have witnessed a similar evolution of the those two.
The aura Hibiki seems to give out is something she has always had. She had it on Earth before being summoned as well. On Earth she was the top of the school and able to do anything she tried, not to mention her family ties being people of power. One of the reasons she gave the Goddess the ok was that she was fairly bored on Earth with everything going her way and was looking for new challenges.
Hibiki is just one of those very charismatic people you come across at times, one that people will naturally want to follow. Would have to go back and check if the Goddess gave her a boost at all but if she was given anything it was probably more in the physical strength side.
The part about Hibiki being worth of respect is debatable.She has an aura similar to Tomoki's eyes that makes people respect her so she's not that different from Tomoki, and I feel the Bug gave her the best position seems she favors women in general.
oh it seems raidou want to side with demon , but i hope he could contact at least once with the hero
finally he is going to the demon side!
I also like how makoto also do mistakes like a real human unlike some other superhuman protagonists
since he is just a begginer as a merchant and all
connections really is somthing you need in any field, business, or politics
since he didn't take an action there in the hyumans side after rembrant ofcourse that will happen
but that is a different matter
I want to see the face of the merchants representative after he learns the consequences of what he has done
when the two countries learns that their only salvation was thrown out like that
the doom of hyumanity has come uahahahaaha
welp joke aside
I am glad to learn that we are also your reason for the fast release
I really love this series
it is my favorite web novel second to MT
I am just a leecher since i don't have much money i so i am glad to know our comments contributes to your motivation
thank you for the translating this as always